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To Entice an Earl
by Naomi Boom
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GENRE: Regency Romance
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BLURB:
Miss
Alexandra Farris lost her heart to her older brother's friend, Lord Maxon
Collins, long, long ago. Despite her girlhood attempts to win him, he never
noticed her. Now that her first season is underway, she understands why. He
prefers willowy blondes, not curvaceous maidens with darker coloring like
herself. Rather than wallow in self-pity, she forgets love and focuses on
something more attainable—an advantageous match.
Lord
Collins is plagued by an uncomfortable feeling whenever he goes near Miss
Farris. One of annoyance. And yet, he can’t seem to stop thinking of her,
touching her, kissing her...He must act in her brother’s stead, which means he
has to approve her suitor and ensure her safety. Unfortunately, he can’t seem
to find a worthy gentleman.
Wedding
her off should be a simple task, but not if he can’t let her go.
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EXCERPT ONE:
“I
have too given you compliments.”
“Really?”
She exhaled. “Name one.”
He
contemplated the matter for a moment and then said, “I told you your hair was
prettier in disarray.”
She
had forgotten that. “So you said one thing. Congratulations.”
“Thank
you.” He swept an exaggerated bow and smirked up at her.
“That
is not something to be proud of. Why, it’s not even that monumental a
compliment.”
He
straightened, and a light flared in his eyes. There had always been an easy
mood between them, but he had never looked at her in such a way before. It was
almost, well, sinful.
“Allow
me to remedy my error, then.” He caught her hand in his, and gazed deep into
her eyes. “Your eyes remind me of a summer storm.” Her gaze faltered from his,
but he continued. “Your skin is as smooth as fine porcelain, and your hair is
made of the most enticing curls I have ever seen. I can imagine your freed hair
would make a man lose his senses. And lastly, you have deliciously kissable
lips.”
She
swallowed. His ridiculous, probably oft-used lines had the most amazing effect
on her. Her knees had grown weak, and her mind was slow to focus. “I-I d-don’t
think…” Her voice trailed off as he chuckled.
“With
that said, you also possess a tremendous ability to irritate me beyond
comprehension.”
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GUEST POST:
Guide to Writing a Romance Novel
“The
goal of good writing is to keep the reader immersed in the story.” – Eilidh
MacKenzie, my wonderful editor. This quote is one of the most useful pieces of
advice I have received, and sadly, it was included in an email rejecting my
first manuscript. But my rejections are a story for another day.
I’ve
learned a lot in my writing career. Some through trial and error, some from my
editor, and some even from reviews of my novels. I’d probably need to write a
book to cover everything, which I will never do, so I’ll limit myself to a few
main points.
1) Story Line – Girl meets boy. Girl and boy fall in love.
Girl dies. As a reader, I would never, ever, ever touch a romance novel
like this. Just… no. This example, while extreme, shows how important a good
story line is. I want my books to be different and memorable, but I do not want
to alienate the reader. So, when I write my novels and get a gut feeling that
my story is going in a wrong direction, I listen. Don’t write crazy scenes just
because you can. Ensure each scene adds to the story.
2) Info Dump – Turns out, info
dumps are bad. What are info dumps? Well, they are a lengthy back story of a
character or situation in a novel. While they contain a ton of useful
information, they also bore readers senseless unless done in some remarkable
way. I tried using an info dump in my second novel. My editor destroyed that
notion so now I avoid them like the plague. Instead, I toss out bits and pieces
throughout the novel whenever applicable.
3) Head Hopping
- Don’t change point of view’s all
willy-nilly in the same section. I had no idea this was a thing until my editor
told me to stop in my first novel. At first, my pride told me not to listen to
my editor, but then my rational side kicked in. Publishers know what sells much
better than I.
4) Heroine – Must have one of
these. She should have likeable qualities, but not sound perfect. Perfection
makes for an uninteresting story line.
5) Hero – Have one of these too. He
can be perfect, though. Just kidding, kind of. I like my Hero’s dark and
brooding with their own issues but they seem to receive a bit more leniency.
Could just be my opinion, though.
6) Physical Descriptions – She has brown hair, blue eyes, and full
lips. Boring. Her blue eyes flashed
as she shook her head, her brown hair falling as the last of her pins fell out.
He couldn’t wait to slip his hands into her tresses, pull her to him and kiss
her full lips. Much better. Granted, I cheated by using a kissing scene,
but still, it’s difficult to write something more boring than a straight-forward
physical description of anything so get creative with it.
7) Character Development –
This kind of goes back to how the Hero and Heroine should have flaws. Flaws add
character, adds personality, and requires some history. I like to decide on
certain attributes for each character and then write the story. The Hero’s
responses should align with his beliefs and tastes which will show his
personality. Sometimes, I discover something new about him as I write, and then
I have to add that throughout the story. I do this until he feels like a real
person. I edit a lot.
8) Romance – Must have romance
in a romance novel. But here’s my own creative approach to infusing emotion
into my novel. When I finish editing, I go back and put a hefty dose of my soul
into the book. I tweak parts until I feel like crying in hopes the reader will
feel at least a smidgen of what I feel. It’s a bit emotionally draining but
worth it. Even though it takes about a week to recuperate.
9) The Black Moment – A
good romance novel will always have something dramatic happen where all hope of
a happily ever after dies. A giant misunderstanding could cause a black moment,
or lovers could get torn apart, or someone gets sick and dies but doesn’t
really die. There’s many more options out there but something terrible must
happen. This engages the reader and makes the ending so much better. Fun fact,
I just learned this term existed for the dramatic, angsty event recently.
10) The End. I love writing those
two words but I hate writing the ending. I really am just using this point to
complain about writing endings.
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AUTHOR BIO:
Naomi Boom never
expected to love writing. Her inspiration struck while searching for the
perfect historical romance novel to read. Nothing sounded appealing, so she
decided to write her own. That one novel has morphed into a series, and
hopefully many, many more.
She
resides in her home state of South Dakota with her husband and toddler. Her
dream is to someday find an acreage where she can raise chickens and,
naturally, continue her writing.
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