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Monday, February 6, 2017

Dark Communion by CJ Perry - Book Tour - Review - Giveaway - Enter Daily!


Hello lovelies! It gives me great pleasure today to host CJ Perry and his new book, “Dark Communion”!  For other stops on his Goddess Fish Promotions Book Tour, please click on the banner above or any of the images in this post – except the Available at Amazon picture. 

Be sure to make it to the end of this post to enter to win a $10 Amazon or Barnes and Noble Gift Card!  Also, come back daily to interact with CJ and to increase your chances of winning!

Thanks for stopping by!  Wishing you lots of luck in this fabulous giveaway!


Dark Communion
by CJ Perry

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GENRE: Dark Fantasy

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BLURB:

A cursed line of Minotaurs has kept Ayla’s people enslaved for 200 years. With nothing left to live for and a death sentence in her womb, Ayla trades her soul to a dark goddess for a chance to break the curse that keeps her people in chains. Armed with only her faith, Ayla and her brethren lead a revolution against an army of half-beasts led by the immortal son of the Goddess Herself.

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EXCERPT TWO:

The minotaur caught up to Deetra and pushed her down into the sand. Deetra rolled away, but he stood over her, menacing and taunting her. She kicked out at his crotch but missed.

Ayla gave the heavy iron bars a futile shake. “Open this! Now! DEETRAA!”

Alex pried Ayla's hands off the gate and held them. “You can't save her! We have to go, now!”

Ayla snatched her hands away from him. Deetra screamed from the arena floor and the crowd cheered. Ayla turned to look but Alex grabbed her again, by the shoulders.

“We have time to run, but only if we leave now!”

“Get off of me!” Ayla slapped Alex in the mouth. He recoiled and held a hand where she hit him. Ayla pushed him by the chest and accused the other men in the ready room with her eyes.

“Open it.”

Butch pushed between the others and shoved Alex out of the way.

“You heard the Priestess.”

Ayla eyed him as he bent at the knees. He gripped the bottom bar of the portcullis and rolled his shoulders to ready himself.

“My people are still loyal to the Night Goddess.”

The other men lined up on either side of him.

Ayla gave Alex a stern look. “Are mine?”

He shook his head, defeated, and took his place next to Butch. “We’re gonna die.”

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REVIEW:


This book is book one of the Godswar Chronicles Series.  I enjoyed that this was the first book as I was able to start right off from the beginning and not worry about missing the details from any previous books in the series.

This book starts off with the end of Ayla’s rape.  I have to be honest; I was a little off put by this very dark, gruesome, and graphic beginning.  I finished the first chapter and didn’t come back to the book for a couple of days.

I was pretty set on not liking this book and wasn’t sure I was even going to finish reading it.  But I hate not knowing how things end.  So I picked my tablet back up and continued reading this book.  I am glad that I did, because the story was interesting and had strong developed characters.

In this book, the main character, Ayla decides she is tired of being a slave to the Minotaurs and makes a deal with The Goddess of Darkness.  In exchange for her soul The Goddess gives Ayla the strength and power to fight the Minotaurs.  The Goddess also instructs Ayla to find the Freeman as they will help her battle against the Minotaurs.  However, the Minotaurs are hot on her trail and Ayla has to move fast to avoid capture and progress with her goals.  It will take everything Ayla has to break the curse and set her people free – but Ayla is willing to do whatever it takes for the good of her people.

This book is full of non-stop action and there are a few surprises along the way.

This story had incredible world-building which is very important in fantasy books.  I was very impressed with the significant detail that Mr. Perry provided.  It was very easy to picture.  Also, sometimes the magic powers can come across so fanatical.  This was not the case in this book.  Mr. Perry did a terrific job making this book easy to understand whether you are a regular to fantasy books or somewhat of a newbie like me.

I liked Ayla as she was a fighter, no matter what the Minotaurs did to her.  I felt connected and bonded with the characters.  I was quickly caught up in their story and found myself rooting for Ayla and cringing whenever something bad was about to happen.

As this book is the first book in a series, there are a lot of background details to help create the storyline and overall plot.  Usually this can be quite overwhelming; however, Mr. Perry did a great job creating an even-toned, steady pace, and flowing storyline.

This storyline is something everyone will be able to connect to – the fight for power and the fight for freedom.

This book is a true dark, epic fantasy book that is full of interesting, intriguing, and just down right whoa scenes.  There were definitely some moments I was like, “Did that really just happen?!”  Lol!  But as always I try to keep these reviews without any spoilers.

I would recommend this book to anyone interested in a classic fantasy book.  However, I would not recommend this book to a younger crowd as it is a very dark, gruesome, and graphic book.  I think many people will enjoy stepping into this fascinating and thought-proving world.

**Disclaimer: I received a complimentary copy of this book and have voluntarily provided an honest, and unbiased review in accordance with FTC regulations.**

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AUTHOR BIO:


My deep and abiding love of fantasy began when I was six when I first saw the 1981 film Dragonslayer on VHS with my father. He loved fantasy movies too, but didn’t have the courage to be a dork about it like I did. That movie was a gateway drug that led me straight to the hard stuff - CS Lewis. I was far too young for such potency but by the time I was ten I had read the whole series. That’s when I found my first Dungeons and Dragons group. When I started playing, my friends and I used pre-made campaign settings and published adventures, but I quickly grew restless with their limitations and trite story lines. I needed my own persistent world: something adaptable to my whim and that no one else owned.

Back in my day, there was no internet, so I took out every book about castles and medieval history from the school library and read them in Math class (I'm still terrible at math as a result). I came up with an entire world and brand new history. I read books on cartography and hand drew maps of my new world. I created a cosmology, a hierarchy of gods, and the tenets of their religions. I read the Dungeon Master's guide a dozen times, and every fantasy novel I could get my hands on.

Then, one day, I sat down and told my friends, "Hey guys, wanna try my story instead?"

Even 15 years after the original D&D campaigns ended, former players tell me that they share our incredible stories with their children. I'm honored to say that most of those players still have their original character sheets 16-20 years later, and a couple have even named their children after them.

Now, I'm 39 years old and a loving father of 2 girls, and I still play those games on occasion. My passion has evolved into putting those ideas and amazing stories on paper for the whole world to enjoy. My first novel took me and co-author DC Fergerson 10 years to write and topped out at 180,000 words. Being too long and too complex, I finally ended the project and took its lessons to heart.

I learned that Dungeons & Dragons did not translate well into a novel. D&D made for great times, but also for some meandering plot lines, pointless encounters, and poor character motivations. No matter how memorable some of the moments were, if I wanted anyone to read my story, I needed to learn a lot more about writing.

I threw myself into being a full time student of novel crafting. I read every book on writing by Dwight Swain I could find. I paid Chuck Sambuchino (Editor for Writer's Digest) to critique and edit my older work. I took James Patterson's Masterclass, went to college, and joined online writing communities. All the while, I read my favorite fantasy novels again, only this time with a mental highlighter. I reworked my stories, outlined them, and decided to start from the beginning.

Many, many years later, I am in the final edit and proofreading stage of Dark Communion, the first installment of the Shadowalker Chronicles. My role as a father of two girls heavily influenced the characters I’d known for over 20 years, shaping them into women that my own daughters could respect. My characters took on a depth and quality that brings them off the page and into the minds of readers, because they have become all too real. I was privileged enough to work on two careers at the same time to accomplish this feat - a fun-loving and involved stay-at-home dad, and a full time writer.

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GIVEAWAY INFO:

CJ will be awarding a $10 Amazon or Barnes and Noble Gift Card to a randomly drawn winner via Rafflecopter during the tour.


**This post contains affiliate links and if clicked and a purchase made I may receive a small commission to help support this blog.  This does not cost you anything, it just helps pay for all those awesome giveaways on here.**

This contest is sponsored by a third party. Fabulous and Brunette is a registered host of Goddess Fish Promotions.  Prizes are given away by the sponsors and not Fabulous and Brunette. The featured author and Goddess Fish Promotions are solely responsible for the giveaway prize.

Thursday, September 22, 2016

Dark Communion by CJ Perry - Virtual Book Tour - Guest Post - Giveaway - Enter Daily!


Hi lovelies! It gives me great pleasure today to host CJ Perry and his new book, “Dark Communion”!  For other stops on his Goddess Fish Promotions Book Tour, please click on the banner above.

Be sure to make it to the end of this post to enter to win one of TWO Gift Cards!!  Yep – that’s right!!  There will be TWO lucky winners in this giveaway!!  One lucky winner will win a $20 Amazon or Barnes & Noble Gift Card and the other lucky winner will win a $10 Amazon or Barnes and Noble Gift Card.  Also, come back daily to interact with CJ and to increase your chances of winning! 

Thanks for stopping by!  Wishing you lots of luck in this exciting giveaway!


Dark Communion
by CJ Perry

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GENRE:  Epic Fantasy

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BLURB:

The minotaurs have kept Ayla and Deetra's people in chains for 200 years. With nothing left to live for, and a death sentence in her womb, Ayla trades her soul for a chance to break the curse which holds her people in slavery. Armed only with her faith, she and Deetra start a revolution, and bring about the return of the Goddess of Darkness.

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EXCERPT THREE:

Ayla lifted the woman’s chin with her finger. “What is your name?”

“Ava.”

“How far along are you?” They both knew what she really asked; are you carrying a calf?

The woman met Ayla’s eyes and did not look away.

“Three months.”

Ayla’s heart ached with pity. Judging by the size of her womb, if she had carried a human child, she would only have two months to go. Horses clopped up the drawbridge until the other wagon stopped behind the first. The people on the back leaned to see what went on up ahead. Ayla knelt down in front of the pregnant woman on the cool stone of the gatehouse.

Her voice echoed off the stone walls. “Who is this man with you?”

The woman bowed her head. “My brother, Gaelan, milady.”

Butch’s chest rumbled. “It’s Priestess.”

The woman looked up, then back down and hurried to correct herself. “He’s my brother, Priestess.”

Ayla shook her head at Butch with a stern look and he dipped his head in silent apology. She lifted the woman’s chin again. Her voice kept the compassion it had before, but with an edge.

“You are too far along for any surgeon to help you.”

“I know, Priestess. That’s not why I came.” The pregnant woman’s green eyes held Ayla’s gaze and did not waiver. She set her jaw. “I want to fight.”

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GUEST POST:

Making the Story Believable: How to Write Realistic Fantasy

There is no trick to writing realistic fantasy, but there are some things to keep in mind. The first one is: “plausibility not realism.” The most helpful question to ask while writing is: “Does this fantasy element NEED to be in here?” If the answer is, “No,” or “I'm not sure,” or “I could make a reason,” or any variation of those - cut it. There’s a chance it will stick out in the reader’s mind as odd, or bring up too many questions that will distract them and pull them out of the story.

For instance, I once was asked to review a Modern Fantasy novel on my blog (artofthearcane.wordpress.com) that I put down after one or two chapters because of a single fantasy element. It was a cube worn on the wrist like a watch for communication. Nothing wrong with that I guess, until you consider that it was a “magic” device with a silly name that duplicated something that we, and the characters in this MODERN story already have in real life. Cellphones. At first I didnt know that was what bothered me. It just felt hokey. Later, as I wrote the review I finally figured it out.

A product like that has to have a need. With so many devices that can do the same thing, a magical cube-phone is superfluous. What wizard, shaman, or mage is going to burn lean calories to make a cellphone/tablet/smartwatch when he can just run out to a store that sells them, or just steal one? Now, the argument could be made that the need was to avoid detection by the NSA or what-have-you, but that need was not expressed in the story. Not only that, but that world had an abundance of magic. Invariably, the same surveillance/protection arms race would still exist amongst magic users - again negating the need for that device in the story. 

So, what's the point of that looong example? It demonstrates how long the discussion or explanation has to get to explain or argue a bad fantasy element in a story. It works the other way around too. If a lot of technology exists in a high fantasy story with plenty of magic, it should be obvious why that technology exists. Is magic a recent thing and the technology was already there? Because, who the hell needs steam power when you have levitation and other forms of magical propulsion and travel? Who needs gunpowder when there is a mage on every corner with a fireball spell? Your reason for having these things in your story should conform to the setting or to common sense without the need for too much explicit telling. 

Another mindset that’s needed is courage. Stephen King said, “I’m convinced that fear is at the root of most bad writing.” Don’t be fearful of fantasy elements in a story. As long as they have a need in the world, it is plausible that they exist. It’s the author's world and they can shape it any way that serves the story, plot, and characters best. Write fearlessly. While a wrist-cube-phone made me close a book forever, the Medusa sitting at the front desk of a police station made me keep reading another one. But there was a REASON medusa took a receptionist job at the police station. The premise of the book explains it, and the author used just one sentence to help with the justification. It was just enough that, while it surprised me, I liked it. Medusa felt right in her swivel chair, her snake-hair fetching her a pencils and watching who else came in the door. It was brilliant.

Moral of the story: As long as logic is on the side of the fantasy element, and it is written fearlessly, the reader will believe in the story. Suspension of disbelief is powerful, but illogical, or fearful storytelling can snuff it out. Stay logical and courageous - and your reader will follow as far down the rabbit hole as the story takes them.

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AUTHOR BIO:


My deep and abiding love of fantasy began when I was six when I first saw the 1981 film Dragonslayer on VHS with my father. He loved fantasy movies too, but didn’t have the courage to be a dork about it like I did. That movie was a gateway drug that led me straight to the hard stuff - CS Lewis. I was far too young for such potency but by the time I was ten I had read the whole series. That’s when I found my first Dungeons and Dragons group. When I started playing, my friends and I used pre-made campaign settings and published adventures, but I quickly grew restless with their limitations and trite story lines. I needed my own persistent world: something adaptable to my whim and that no one else owned.

Back in my day, there was no internet, so I took out every book about castles and medieval history from the school library and read them in Math class (I'm still terrible at math as a result). I came up with an entire world and brand new history. I read books on cartography and hand drew maps of my new world. I created a cosmology, a hierarchy of gods, and the tenets of their religions. I read the Dungeon Master's guide a dozen times, and every fantasy novel I could get my hands on.

Then, one day, I sat down and told my friends, "Hey guys, wanna try my story instead?"

Even 15 years after the original D&D campaigns ended, former players tell me that they share our incredible stories with their children. I'm honored to say that most of those players still have their original character sheets 16-20 years later, and a couple have even named their children after them.

Now, I'm 39 years old and a loving father of 2 girls, and I still play those games on occasion. My passion has evolved into putting those ideas and amazing stories on paper for the whole world to enjoy. My first novel took me and co-author DC Fergerson 10 years to write and topped out at 180,000 words. Being too long and too complex, I finally ended the project and took its lessons to heart.

I learned that Dungeons & Dragons did not translate well into a novel. D&D made for great times, but also for some meandering plot lines, pointless encounters, and poor character motivations. No matter how memorable some of the moments were, if I wanted anyone to read my story, I needed to learn a lot more about writing.

I threw myself into being a full time student of novel crafting. I read every book on writing by Dwight Swain I could find. I paid Chuck Sambuchino (Editor for Writer's Digest) to critique and edit my older work. I took James Patterson's Masterclass, went to college, and joined online writing communities. All the while, I read my favorite fantasy novels again, only this time with a mental highlighter. I reworked my stories, outlined them, and decided to start from the beginning.

Many, many years later, I am in the final edit and proofreading stage of Dark Communion, the first installment of the Shadowalker Chronicles. My role as a father of two girls heavily influenced the characters I’d known for over 20 years, shaping them into women that my own daughters could respect. My characters took on a depth and quality that brings them off the page and into the minds of readers, because they have become all too real. I was privileged enough to work on two careers at the same time to accomplish this feat - a fun-loving and involved stay-at-home dad, and a full time writer.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

CONNECT WITH CJ:

Blog:

Website:

Twitter:

Facebook:

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AMAZON BUY LINK:



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

GIVEAWAY INFO:

CJ Perry will be awarding a $10 and a $20 Amazon or Barnes and Noble GC to two randomly drawn winners via Rafflecopter during the tour.


**This post contains affiliate links and if clicked and a purchase made I may receive a small commission to help support this blog.  This does not cost you anything, it just helps pay for all those awesome giveaways on here.**

This contest is sponsored by a third party. Fabulous and Brunette is a registered host of Goddess Fish Promotions.  Prizes are given away by the sponsors and not Fabulous and Brunette. The featured author and Goddess Fish Promotions are solely responsible for the giveaway prize.